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Thursday, 23 July 2009

Cinderella- my retake (really different!!!)

Once upon a time in a far away land, a young boy called Williamas was in a mine, cleaning and dusting. "Oi, Williamas, clean my shoes while you're at it!" Harold screamed. "And mine too, you ugly thing!" Harry, Harold's twin, cackled meanly. Poor Williamas was dressed in a bin bag. 'Ugly things like you don't need to wear nice clothes!' Harold had said.

"Oh, I cannot wait until the rock concert." Harry said to Harold.
"Hmm, me neither! Oh and that horrible boy Williamas got a invite too, but of course we we'll tell him he can't go because he has chores to do!"
Williamas sat down on the dusty floor. "A rock concert sounds so much fun. I've never had fun in my life." Williamas said sadly. Oh yes! My good friend Thomas may be able to help me out! he thought excitedly.

Thomas stood up and looked thoughtful. "Well, I can't get a pumpkin for you to ride in. But I can give you a bike ride. And I can't do your chores for you, but I can get another servant too. Clothes-wise, well, do you want to borrow my trousers?" he offered kindly. "Oh Thomas, you truly are a genius! But won't Harry and Harold see me?" Williamas remembered.
"No problem... I will paint a moustache on you with some coal from the mine." Thomas suggested.

And then Williamas had a brilliant time at the rock concert. He met a lovely girl who had lost her shoe there, so he looked for the shoe, found it and went to her house to return it. Then it was love at second sight and they married each other and had 4 children.

Hope you enjoyed this "retake". I liked changing all the characters :)

19 comments:

Aparna said...

hi rosh! cute blog sweety!


you seem very talented and imaginative

different and innocent concept u got here

better than the classic original...

Miss Sunshine said...

that was some imagination :D I like :D

The Vitruvian Boy said...

Cool.... :)
Good imagination.... :)

Boys were always secondary in most of the fairy tales...
Now we finally got a boy protagonist... :)

parzi said...

that was such an adorable n fresh take on such a famous fairy tale..hats off 2 ur imagination
gr8 work dear!
way to go!

Leo said...

wow dear! what a different take on cinderella...! :D

4 kids? wow.. hope he has lot of money... they can be a handful u know!! :)

Arun Kumar said...

wowie shortie...
cute story... u DO have brains... :P
lovely re-conceptualization (?).....

Priya Joyce said...

hey li'l gal tats reely creative re..I mean all thnk of writing somehing new.fresh n all.but I found ur attempt reely gud something many dun think of doing..n loved it ..:)

lostmermaid said...

ha ha i loved reading this !! whoa :)

Sona Pandya said...

Dear rosh, lol, just coudn't stop smilin.. wonderful and joyful post. loved it chukkers.. shared it with dad too.. and guess what.. both ur parents are still smiling..our girl is growing up to be a good writer..

roshwrites said...

@Aparna- hi! glad you like my blog and thanks for following and commenting!
@Miss Sunshine- thank you :D
@The Vitruvian Boy- yeah I know! Boys never get their fair share of main characters!
@Parzi- thanks very much :) It was just something I thought of the top of my head :)
@Leo- heehee, yeah, I know, 4 kids!!! but this was the olden times you know! thanks!
@Arun Kumar- thanks Midget! (only kidding!) :P
@Priya Joyce- thank you for visiting and commenting! hope to see you back soon!
@Lost Mermaid- glad you liked it :) thank you!
@Mummy- :D :D :D

The Solitary Writer said...

nice thinkin..... u shd read my take on famous fable hare nd tortoise ....i wrte it last yr...do read it....

roshwrites said...

@The Solitary Writer- thanks... will definitely read your take!

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