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Saturday, 13 June 2009

Time-Acrostic For Teens Prompt




This is something you measure

Immensely important in life

Midday, midnight, evening, morning. Time is

Evolving every day and night.


Hey everyone! This is another Acrostics For Teens Prompt! Hope you enjoyed reading this. Please comment!
Keep reading :)

roshwrites.

8 comments:

Sam said...

hey rosh, are you for real a 12 yr old ? dont get me wrong, but u write too well fir ur age :)

keep writing.

Pretty Me!! said...

its good .. except one thing .. in acrostic each line shud have its own meaning .. no breaks allowed .. like u did in third line .. hope u will check this next time !

Hopeless Romantic said...

wow..12 yr old..grt work.

roshwrites said...

@Sam- Yup! I'm twelve :) Thanks for commenting! I like your 55 fiction blog... it's really good!
@Pretty Me- thanks for the advice! I will definitely check this next time! I would love to get more advice from you about poems :)
@Hopeless Romantic- thank you for following & commenting!
Keep visiting everyone!
roshwrites

Aarthi said...

Rosh,

As prats said, the break is the only thing you need to take care of...

Otherwise...it was perfect! Loved it! :D

Savannah said...

Just beautiful. You are growing with your poetry in leaps and bounds!

roshwrites said...

@Aarthi- Thank you very much :) Will take care of the break in future acrostics- thank you and Prats for the advice :-) Much appriciated!!
@Savannah- First of all Savannah I have to say a massive thank you to you! You have been reading all my acrostics and commenting and it makes me smile when I see a lovely comment on my acrostics :) And also, thank you for saying that my acrostic was beautiful :]
Love,
roshwrites

Sona Pandya said...

Rosh.. im a complete novice at writing..do listen to what the others say.. well done.. keep up the good work. you have defined time very well. i believe as u know "live for the moment".

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