Her heart was pounding in her chest.
The door handle was covered in blood and blood went on to the girl's hands.
Why is there blood on the door, she wondered, scared.
Then she opened the door, and paused, frightened that someone would see her.
At her feet, a body lay. Her sister, who was murdered my her parents.
This little girl found out her parents murdered her sister, because there was a bloody knife in her parents room. Which the girl used to kill her parents, the same way they killed her sister. Girl pressed the knife in heart.
8 comments:
strong fiction...
dark theme... liked the flow though :)
take care... cheers...
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August 10, 2009
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keep up the good work
it is gory and scaaaaary! :P
nice one though :D
I returned back to the blogosphere, and thought of checking in with my youngest writer...came in here, was admiring the cute template and then this read...woohoo...very dark and very gripping indeed:)
I loved the flow, and the way u potrayed it, I could actually visualise it...great work:)
wowie.... dark... my fav genre...
good one..
bu Why did the parents murder her sis??????
why was the sister murdered by her parents? :O
oh dear.. rosh..u write such posts too.. good one but scares me.. can that really happen.. i hope not..i believe a parent wud die for his/her child.. .
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